CheezLog's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[It's Pirate Day!]

Awesome

The art was simple but also beautiful and well done. Voice acting was great. Funny jokes... I don't see what more you could ask for.

Art 9/10 (one or two rough edges)
Animation 7/10
Humor 10/10
Voice acting 8/10

JoSilver responds:

I tried my best! =3

Went well for 2 days of work!

[TelephoneBoothClockEngage]

Funniest moments

The funniest parts were:

- The afro drinking beer
- when telephone booth clock skinned the cat and said he just found out one way. (I lol'd pretty hard then.
- son of a bitch

Topcatyo responds:

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed the movie!

[FRUIT]

Great Job!

I love the style of drawings and the smooth animation. My one criticism is the man's face was drawn poorly. I don't no if you were going for that on purpose or not but it looked a bit sloppy. No worries though. I thoroughly enjoyed it and you did a terrific job with the animation, most of the drawings, and the timing of the music.

Animation - 10/10
Drawing - 8/10
Music - 9/10
Overall effect - 9/10

Great job!

Munglai responds:

I was going for that but I knew some people wouldn't dig it. I find it pretty hard to create nice art with the Flash drawing tools that isn't just all clean and bland.

[Pip and Peppa]

I just want to say

If this didn't end so abruptly, maybe had a to be continued button, and had a preloader, I can almost guarantee this would have gotten a 4 average, a daily feature, and maybe even the front page because the movie was phenomenal!

as for the preloader, even though the movie is "not compatible". It can still be done. Just export the movie as a quicktime movie, import it into flash, put it on the second frame as a movie clip, put the preloader on the first frame, do a little programming, and there you have it. There are plenty of other movies on newgrounds that were made with other programs but still had preloaders. For example all of knox's klaymations. If you want the specifics look it up. However, I highly advise you resubmit this with a preloader and an icon because if you do it will surely succeed. Good luck.

PS gave you a 5/5

Stalagmite responds:

holy shazbars! thank you so much for this advice. i did have that idea but i suck at programming. LOL. my next animation JINKO wil be entered with a preloader made by drewthemew! yayness. thank you so much for this uplifting review. and sorry about th absence of basically everything. lol. thanks man! you rock :D:D:D

[RHG : Knight Vs Srider]

Pretty good

The stick animation is great and the music goes well too. You obviously know what you are doing and I love the green blast thing. I'm not very good with the blur effect. (Isn't it like expand borders or sumthin?) Anyways, there are a couple things that could be improved. The only background (the crack in the earth i think) is drawn very poorly and there needs to be sound effects. But besides that its lookin great.

Animation - 10/10
Art - 5/10 meh... the swords were drawn well
Music and sounds - 8/10 (needs sound effects!) :)

Overall

xtended12 responds:

Okay I try

[Geo Space Trailer]

lookin great

Drawings are great and so is the animmation especially the gunfire! (nice touch)
The one thing is to make the movement of the limbs a bit smoother. Like when he is raising his arm and it shifts angles it was kinda choppy. Also, I think that trailers are supposed to be submitted to a special section of newgrounds just for demos and trailers. (not completely sure though) anyways I look forward to it and keep up the good work.

Art-10/10
Animation-8/10
Sounds and music-10/10
Overall- 9/10

GeoRama responds:

Thank you :D

[SsistedSuicideAnticipatio]

Drawn well...

but thats about it.

EmptyOrange responds:

Thank you, seeing as the only part that I contributed to was the drawing. The song was chosen because it was 14 seconds and had distinct changes in it. On top of that it was all purely experimental. By the way, it has a story line you probably didn't catch. Which is probably why it was given a four. Thank you for your helpful review.

[The Intruder_By Ryan]

WTH?

Mature?! are you kidding me?! there was no launguage in it only a beep, and there was but cartoon violence if even that. I'm not saying that you SHOULD make an M rated flash. I'm just saying this isn't. This is E! No room for debate.

Ryansdaman1 responds:

I dont really kno y its mature

[the death race]

A all around newby flash

This is basically the kind of flashes I was making in 6th grade. (A year after learning about flash). Don't get discouraged, but this is the kind of flash you show your friends, not the kind of flash you submit on newgrounds. I was shocked and amazed when I saw the quality of the flashes being submitted to newgrounds and this doesn't make the cut. However, I love the choice of music. I got that song from the spiderman soundtrack as well as extended version of what we're all about by sum 41. (If you have it you'll know what I'm talking about.) Anyways keep trying, and it was a decent first attempt but not newgrounds material.

nikkilak responds:

thanks for a good review! and i found flash about two months ago.... and im a 7th grader.

[Awesome's School]

Pretty poorly done

It had a few funny things but mostly it was just overly violent and repetitive. Also, the swearing really wasn't done in a way to make it funny. I laughed a bit at the part where he talked about winning cash on newgrounds but besides that it was pretty lame.

Lalo responds:

overly violent? wtf.