5/5
5/5
thanks ;)
Loved it
It started off kinda slow, but it picked up fast and it was hilarious! Plus the animation and art itself were good as well.
The best thing about this video was the quality jokes. I'm sick and tired of all the shock humor on TV and the internet and it was requesting to see some real quality jokes on a flash. The vietnam mug boot, and "original pride flag" were absolutely golden. I haven't laughed this hard at a newgrounds flash in a while.
Great work!
10/10
Glad you enjoyed it! Using shock humor without any sort of motivation or justification just seems forced to me.
You have a LOT of potential
You're a great artist and you have some animation skills. But the photos and the speaking pissed the hell out of me. The flash was decent itself, but try making something more appealing to the audience.
I understand what you are saying, this is my first real attempt at anything like this, will definitely fix up the photos better for the next episode.
:'(
I'm sad to hear that Lazy Muffin is being drafted. I was never a major fan of his work but I could always get a few good laughs out of the nameless episodes that i saw. He's a great animator and i wish him the best.
As for the content of the animation. Most parts were actually animated pretty well. It was just the drawings an art that were a bit sloppy. It needed music during the transitions though.
Animation - 8.5/10
Art - 6/10
Plot/theme - 9/10
overall - 8/10
4/5
there was ambience during the transitions though.
Fantastic!
Art - 10/10
Animation - 10/10
Joke - 8/10
Overall, it's a beautifully composed animation and it looks very professional. If it were up to me, this would have gotten some kind of recognition.
5/5
Thanks man! I really appreciate it!
Hahahahaha
Wow, the shitty animation and inconsistencies actually made this flash like 20 times funnier. To be honest, I don't think it would have been nearly as funny if it wasn't for the animation. Anyways, the voice acting was really good and I love how Jim's voice changes like halfway through the flash. Anyways, it's a nice piece of work and it made me laugh... a lot!
8/10
5/5
*possibly faved*
=O you just made my day! kinda... not really! but still you are awesome and you should definitely fave it because that what cool people do... you wanna be cool don't you... well then fave it! nah im jking you dont have to if you dont wanna =P
you = cool for being so cool
This better go up in score because it deserves it
If an animation this good only deserves a "great" score then there is no hope for someone like me. This flash is terrific. Great art and animation, funny jokes, and decent voice acting. The one place where the voice acting was a little dull was the last line where they exclaim "we'll get you next year". But besides that everything else was great.
Art - 10/10
Animation - 9/10
Humor - 8/10
Voice-acting - 6/10
Overall - 8/10
Thanks a lot, let's hope it rises a little more :D
Yeah, I'm not happy with the "We'll get you next year" too but anyway, everything here is practice, I'm not going seriously, flash is for fun, if I don't have fun doing it, then why should I do it?
My goal is to improve at every flash I make, and I'm acomplishing it.
Thanks :D
GREAT!
Borders were a bit sloppy at times so I couldn't give you a perfect, but overall great job.
BTW, THIS SHOULD BE RATED T!
yeah ...just saw it after i submited , thats the price for making in a hush ... thanks for the review and for the note.
I like the color ORANGE!
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