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Misleading

This flash did not really show in any way the effects of smoking. I would have been okay with it if the jokes were really funny but it was just soso. The animation was mediocre as well.

Funny

It was funny to a point but the ending was too abrupt. Great animation and good voices. The toungue sucking part was LOL funny. The rest of it was just snicker funny. I suggest making a sequel with a longer plot and more jokes. Overall good job.

WTH?

Mature?! are you kidding me?! there was no launguage in it only a beep, and there was but cartoon violence if even that. I'm not saying that you SHOULD make an M rated flash. I'm just saying this isn't. This is E! No room for debate.

Ryansdaman1 responds:

I dont really kno y its mature

A all around newby flash

This is basically the kind of flashes I was making in 6th grade. (A year after learning about flash). Don't get discouraged, but this is the kind of flash you show your friends, not the kind of flash you submit on newgrounds. I was shocked and amazed when I saw the quality of the flashes being submitted to newgrounds and this doesn't make the cut. However, I love the choice of music. I got that song from the spiderman soundtrack as well as extended version of what we're all about by sum 41. (If you have it you'll know what I'm talking about.) Anyways keep trying, and it was a decent first attempt but not newgrounds material.

nikkilak responds:

thanks for a good review! and i found flash about two months ago.... and im a 7th grader.

It really wasn't that great

The voices were well done and the animation was superb but it just really wasn't that funny.

I mean its a great flash but I only just kinda snickered.

Goods and Bads

Okay there are some goods and bads.

Goods:

-GREAT animation. It had a really cool effect and felt all mystical
-Cool idea with eh whole jewel in space thing.
-Kept it Everyone rated on Pico day (a hard thing to pull off)

Bads:

-Did not really follow the Pico theme AT ALL.

This would be a 10/10 under any other category but under Pico it just doesn't work.
However I can tell this took hard work and it is a great flash all the same so good job. :)

Exceeds my expectations

I really did not expect this to be any good (mostly because of the name) but to my surprise I loved it the whole way through. The animation was outstanding. It had a cute plot with a funny ending and I loved the facial expressions on the people. I think one of the coolest things though was how you were able to take an "R" rated topic and make it "G" rated and still great! Great work.

Pretty poorly done

It had a few funny things but mostly it was just overly violent and repetitive. Also, the swearing really wasn't done in a way to make it funny. I laughed a bit at the part where he talked about winning cash on newgrounds but besides that it was pretty lame.

Lalo responds:

overly violent? wtf.

Genius

If the jokes ad been done in any other way it would have seemed corny but Harry pulled it off and made it hilarious! 10 stars.

I like the color ORANGE!

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