CheezLog's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[ToyotaClock vs. BedClock]

Hey toyota clock!

UR ON THE FRONT PAGE NOW! How does it feel? :3

actual review:

Voices: 10/10 because its clock crew and that's how its done
Animation: 1/10 There was no animation axcepts when they bounced and it required no skill.
Art 0/10 The only thing that was drawn was the bed and it was bulky and horrible
Story/humor 3/10 nothing too interesting.

overall 3/10
1/5

[Dendrophobia]

Simple but hillarious

The title says it all

[Pip and Peppa]

I just want to say

If this didn't end so abruptly, maybe had a to be continued button, and had a preloader, I can almost guarantee this would have gotten a 4 average, a daily feature, and maybe even the front page because the movie was phenomenal!

as for the preloader, even though the movie is "not compatible". It can still be done. Just export the movie as a quicktime movie, import it into flash, put it on the second frame as a movie clip, put the preloader on the first frame, do a little programming, and there you have it. There are plenty of other movies on newgrounds that were made with other programs but still had preloaders. For example all of knox's klaymations. If you want the specifics look it up. However, I highly advise you resubmit this with a preloader and an icon because if you do it will surely succeed. Good luck.

PS gave you a 5/5

Stalagmite responds:

holy shazbars! thank you so much for this advice. i did have that idea but i suck at programming. LOL. my next animation JINKO wil be entered with a preloader made by drewthemew! yayness. thank you so much for this uplifting review. and sorry about th absence of basically everything. lol. thanks man! you rock :D:D:D

[The Heroes Flash]

I really enjoyed it

There are a lot of REALLY GOOD things in this flash and a lot of not so good things.

Good:

- GREAT music choice 10/10
- Great story. a little unclear but still pretty good. 8/10
- Amazing camera movement and zooming. I can tell you have a good sense of direction which is vital to fantasy and action movies 10/10
- Great energy ball things 10/10
- Love the shadows in the ruins

not so good:

-poor use of paint tool with stick figures and energy blasts 4/10
-poor grammar. NA/10 I won't dock points because I can tell you are still getting used to english but good effort.
-the cracks and shattered debris were too geometrical and straight. It needs to look like it has depth. 3/10

Overall- 8/10
4/5

With improvement in those things listed, if you resubmitted a new version of this I could see it doing very well.

[RHG : Knight Vs Srider]

Pretty good

The stick animation is great and the music goes well too. You obviously know what you are doing and I love the green blast thing. I'm not very good with the blur effect. (Isn't it like expand borders or sumthin?) Anyways, there are a couple things that could be improved. The only background (the crack in the earth i think) is drawn very poorly and there needs to be sound effects. But besides that its lookin great.

Animation - 10/10
Art - 5/10 meh... the swords were drawn well
Music and sounds - 8/10 (needs sound effects!) :)

Overall

xtended12 responds:

Okay I try

[weebl and bob - paper]

Um I don't get it...

This flash was really not that funny, and the whole animation was just the same thing looping over and over. Sure it must have taken a little bit of time to get the scratchy pencil-like drawings, but it was too simple to be the daily feature and weekly second place. The only reason this got those awards was because the artist is so famous and people vote 5 before watching the movie because they like the artist.

Art- 3/10
Animation- 1/10
Plot/humor/script- 4/10

Overall- 3/10
2/5

[How To Stop a Nightmare]

Way underrated and I love EVERYTHING about it

It's outstanding. All the different mixed medias used, the blurs and the lights and the shading... it was just incredible. The whole idea was original and creative and just... just... im out of adjectives to describes its awesomeness.

FRONT PAGE!
this flash is going on my favorites!

Art-10/10 It seems so simple, yet when you look at it again you realize just how detailed it really is
Animation-10/10 Perfect for this flash
Music-9/10 There were periods where it was silent for too long but I can't dock points for that really because everything else makes up for it plus more
Idea/story/concept-11/10

[Geo Space Trailer]

lookin great

Drawings are great and so is the animmation especially the gunfire! (nice touch)
The one thing is to make the movement of the limbs a bit smoother. Like when he is raising his arm and it shifts angles it was kinda choppy. Also, I think that trailers are supposed to be submitted to a special section of newgrounds just for demos and trailers. (not completely sure though) anyways I look forward to it and keep up the good work.

Art-10/10
Animation-8/10
Sounds and music-10/10
Overall- 9/10

GeoRama responds:

Thank you :D

[Claymania]

It's a good first attempt

Really cool idea and overall great claymation but it looks a bit choppy and unprofessional and the background changes also contribute to that. Overall good solid work though.

7/10
3/5

[All Your Pie]

OMG!

I just got the joke about lenny and the dental plan now 5 years after originally seeing this! I saw that episode! That's a reeeaaaly old one. I love the simpsons. I can tell you do too considering you COPIED THE WHOLE IDEA FROM THE SIMPSONS EPISODE LISA ON ICE! Its okay though, I don't hold it against you. you're an amazing animator and its boggling to me that this was only your 7th flash. This is a classic and always will be!