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[The Stone]

Good

The animation is fun and technically speaking it is pretty smooth animation too. A few things could be done to make it a bit more professional looking.

- The music notes: Before attempting to make the the music notes fade away, convert the lines to fills so when it fades away it will not show the lines around it.
- A background could really improve it.

Other than that I think it was a nice animation.

[Fourop 2]

Pretty Good Stuff

I think you are very good at animating with the paint tool. However, the art needs some work. Here are some suggestions:

-Spend some time to make a detailed background.
-Use more than one size of the paint brush tool
-Make the lasers more, well, lasery... Everything pretty much has the same texture. Try experimenting with "Alpha" and "Soften Fill Edges".
-Shading
-The cracks in the ground are decent, but need some work.

Anyways, like I said the animation itself was really good, it is just the details that need some work.

Good Job.

[X-Mas Mutiny]

GREAT!

Borders were a bit sloppy at times so I couldn't give you a perfect, but overall great job.

BTW, THIS SHOULD BE RATED T!

Dark-ChiCKeN responds:

yeah ...just saw it after i submited , thats the price for making in a hush ... thanks for the review and for the note.

[Jesus Sweets!]

Sweet Jesus, It's good!

Now, this is how you make a religious flash! Art and animation are great as with everything by kirbopher, and the story-line is hilarious. It's light-hearted satire that still has a religious message but isn't afraid to push the boundaries a tad on the humor. It pokes fun, but not to the point where it becomes offensive to anyone.

This flash can be enjoyed by all, from the fanatics, to the devoted, to the anti-Christs.

Animation - 10/10
Art - 10/10
Humor/story/plot - 10/10
effects - 10/10
voice acting - 9/10

overall - 10/10
5/5

[Jesusmas]

good idea, poor execution....

Let me start out by saying the animation was good, the drawings were good, and the blurred boarders were a nice effect, so you get points for that because that is the hardest part of animating anyways.

Now, as for the plot, I think the idea of having a Jesus-themed Christmas flash was a good idea, but the script and the execution was mediocre. A flash needs to have action, humor, or touch you on a deep level. While there was some suspense, this flash really had none of the three. This should have either been longer and more in-depth as to portraying your message, or should have had a humorous climax rather than just "share the gift of god".

I have no problem with a religious message, but this is something that could have easily been typed up as a chain-mail message.

Anyways,

Art - 8/10
Animation - 7/10
Voice-acting - 9/10
humor/overall theme - 4/10

overall - 6/10

imjeffhip responds:

lol since when was action, humor and being deep the three main rules

[It's Pirate Day!]

Awesome

The art was simple but also beautiful and well done. Voice acting was great. Funny jokes... I don't see what more you could ask for.

Art 9/10 (one or two rough edges)
Animation 7/10
Humor 10/10
Voice acting 8/10

JoSilver responds:

I tried my best! =3

Went well for 2 days of work!

[TelephoneBoothClockEngage]

Funniest moments

The funniest parts were:

- The afro drinking beer
- when telephone booth clock skinned the cat and said he just found out one way. (I lol'd pretty hard then.
- son of a bitch

Topcatyo responds:

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed the movie!

[FRUIT]

Great Job!

I love the style of drawings and the smooth animation. My one criticism is the man's face was drawn poorly. I don't no if you were going for that on purpose or not but it looked a bit sloppy. No worries though. I thoroughly enjoyed it and you did a terrific job with the animation, most of the drawings, and the timing of the music.

Animation - 10/10
Drawing - 8/10
Music - 9/10
Overall effect - 9/10

Great job!

Munglai responds:

I was going for that but I knew some people wouldn't dig it. I find it pretty hard to create nice art with the Flash drawing tools that isn't just all clean and bland.

[Infestation]

F$%^ing bullshit propaganda

This is total BS!

Look I'm glad that you are concerned about the planet. So am I. But honestly, global warming is a load.

Guess what. Here are some FACTS: (I did a project on it)

The earth stopped heating up in 2002. The earth has been cooling ever since.
The arctic ice caps grew 30% from 2007 to 2008
The Antarctic have been growing steadily in mass for the last 10 years
Polar bears can swim for 100 miles nonstop so if their homes melt they can swim to another one (their MARINE animals, look it up)
Al Gore just made it up to promote his carbon trading industry. That's right, its all about the money.

I'd provide resources but I can promote other websites.

Anyways I sound mad but now that I've cooled down a bit I'll say it is important to help the environment but I would focus on recycling, or saving water or something, just not global warming.

Anyways the actual flash itself was pretty good. Artwork suited the theme
Animation reasonably fluid. sound a bit below par but ok.

I just needed to get that out.

NOTE: do not think my political views contributed to your score of 6/10. I gave it a rating strictly on the flash itself. Pretty good job. Don't like the message.

Peace.

[Ten Commandments]

OMG its a cloc crew episode that doesn't blow ass!

AND IT ROCKS!!!!!

Terrific! It was hilarious, clever, well written and directed and just..... yeah it was awesome. I love how you were able to have great artwork but still keep it simple like clock crew. great job.